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 /**
  * Plugin Name: BuddyPress
  * Plugin URI:  http://buddypress.org
- * Description: Social networking in a box. Build a social network for your company, school, sports team or niche community all based on the power and flexibility of WordPress.
+ * Description: BuddyPress is a powerful (yet elegant) suite of social networking components, made the WordPress way, to help you build a flexible & robust community.
  * Author:      The BuddyPress Community
  * Author URI:  http://buddypress.org/community/members/
  * Version:     2.1-alpha
Index: src/bp-loader.php
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 /**
  * Plugin Name: BuddyPress
  * Plugin URI:  http://buddypress.org
- * Description: Social networking in a box. Build a social network for your company, school, sports team or niche community all based on the power and flexibility of WordPress.
+ * Description: BuddyPress is a powerful (yet elegant) suite of social networking components, made the WordPress way, to help you build a flexible & robust community.
  * Author:      The BuddyPress Community
  * Author URI:  http://buddypress.org/community/members/
  * Version:     2.1-alpha
Index: src/bp-themes/bp-default/readme.txt
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 --- About BuddyPress ---
-Social networking in a box. Build a social network for your company, school, sports team or niche community all based on the power and flexibility of WordPress. BuddyPress will let users register on your site and start creating profiles, posting messages, making connections, creating and interacting in groups and much more.
+BuddyPress is a powerful (yet elegant) suite of social networking components, made the WordPress way, to help you build a flexible & robust community.
 
 For help with BuddyPress Default, or for more information about BuddyPress, please visit http://buddypress.org/.
 
Index: src/readme.txt
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 License: GPLv2 or later
 License URI: http://www.gnu.org/licenses/gpl-2.0.html
 
-Social networking in a box. Build a social network for your company, school, sports team, or niche community.
+BuddyPress is a powerful (yet elegant) suite of social networking components, made the WordPress way, to help you build a flexible & robust community.
 
 == Description ==